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You have a nice Cafe there! You only need to pay attention to the shading on some objects. The shading on the character's face (Alice, right?) suggests that the light is coming from the bottom left. It by itself would be strange considering that she s inside a cafe (which I consider to have light coming from up, from light bulbs). However, the shading on other parts of her boddy don't agree with the face's. For example, her right arm has light on the upper part (on the biceps). Her left arm has no light, suggesting she is really turned (or has a dislodged shoulder). Going back to the face, she has light around her mouth, but no light on her forehead (if you consider the light from bottom left, there is no reason for all her face not to be lighted). Another thing with strange shading is the board behind the counter. Unless it is a protuding cube out of the wall and the shade represents one of its sides, there is no real reason for the shadows (flat surfaces should usually keep the same light intensity all over it).
Keep up the good work!! I hope to see more of the cafe sometime :)
I fixed all of the problems you pointed out, and changed the wall color to make Alice's outline more visible. Thank you for pointing them out.
Also, my main focus is actually Alice herself. I will be doing more pieces revolve around Alice in different places and situation.
Alice is a fictional character I created to resemble a certain someone in real life. <3