I haven't seen enough of your work to know what advice to give any worthwhile advice. You should post your future works in progress on the forum, so people can give feedback while you're still working. Getting feedback from multiple people is nice since it prevents any one person from (accidentally) imposing their own style too much.
Ty for a advice and about the background I don''t know so much how to make it like you know like a real background of city or dungeons.And thinking how to start doing characters modules like those www.youtube.com/watch so yea if you can give me some advice about drawing. of course something not big I'll appreciate it !!!! 
And about the Reply i was sure that i clicked it but is see i didn't (when you send a message or reply you don't see the difference.Any even icon that is a reply)
If you click the "Reply" button underneath the comment, that'll notify the person of the reply. Otherwise, they have no way of knowing that you responded.
I think that's better, but I think if you're going to make an actual background rather than just making it transparent, it would be good to have some extra space around the Dugtrio on the bottom and sides, so that it's not butting up against the frame. I think in this case though, transparency would be better.
Mhmm okey i'll change the background (maybe some blue-gray colours i guess it will fit) btw ty for advice I'll try every background version and choose which one should be there
Could you please take out the white background and make it transparent? The white blows the other colours out, making the piece look duller and darker than it is. The submission rules ask for transparent or "fitting" backgrounds because of issues like that.
I think this is a huge step up in quality over your last piece! You're on the right track!