The piece still has the same problems that likely got it a lot of downvotes before:
- jagged outlines on some parts of the hair (the long strands that hang down over the face and left ear)
- pillow shading on the hair, and formless frontal lighting on the face and body. Choose a light source and shade with it in mind, instead of just shading around the edges of objects. You'll probably have an easier time if you choose a light source that's not directly in front of the character.
- really bad banding all over the hair. Don't let your different colours align in stairsteps like that, it makes the underlying pixel grid really pop out.
Thanks @gennoveus!
I got message from bot yesterday what this piece was not able to gather the score needed for inclusion in the gallery. Now i changed it a bit and trying again =)
What about Steam, there i have a lot of friends and they are supported my work, thanks them!
Resubmitted? The queue has been getting a lot added to it recently and I guess your pic got pushed back and lost. I noticed you got a hell of a lot of upvotes for this picture on the Steam community. Top post of the last 3 months, in fact. Congratulations!
Thanks! You comments very helpful, i saw them very often, it's really good what you're teach novices like me!
Anyway I do not want to correct this work, so I'll try to use your advices next time!