The cloth looks kind of random, like you were concentrating on filling space rather than bringing out a shape. Check your reference (or a reference), examine how the cloth looks, and tr to emulate it. Go for a visible overall shape and realistic folding patterns. Aside from that, much of it could use more contrast, the pouches especially. Also, he has somehting around his neck I think, but you can't really see it because the grey blends into the yellow. Brighther colours on the metal and those facial highlights might help.
Err, yes, so there's my full commentary eh. Pixel!
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The cloth looks kind of random, like you were concentrating on filling space rather than bringing out a shape. Check your reference (or a reference), examine how the cloth looks, and tr to emulate it. Go for a visible overall shape and realistic folding patterns. Aside from that, much of it could use more contrast, the pouches especially. Also, he has somehting around his neck I think, but you can't really see it because the grey blends into the yellow. Brighther colours on the metal and those facial highlights might help.
Err, yes, so there's my full commentary eh. Pixel!