The lines are quite nice but I think it would be better like this :

i.gyazo.com/60609088b5971d53cf205c22767e8ed9.png

I just quickly edited the torso and legs colors and in my opinion the rendering is better now. 

Hahah, I improved the values, is it better now? This piece is giving me too much trouble 

The contrast on the fur is too significant.

Ah, the darks look way better in aseprite   I'm going to edit it, you're right. Having criticism is awesome, so thank you!

Hmmm, your "that" has turned out quite strange. You have a dark background and a dark body (which turned out pretty good) and the only thing you see are bright colors that scream at you. Try to soften and darken them a little. And try to make the wings a bit more transparent. Orrr, remove the dark background, lighten the body and go in a lighter direction...