Nice! Glad you fixed it. It looks better and you cut the colours down to 30. 
No problem. 
It's a well done image, especially considering it's your first! Just remember that when you re-upload the image, to edit this submission instead of deleting this and re-submitting from scratch.
Ah okay, thanks for the advice ! I don't have it on a seperate layer but I still try to edit the picture. But again thank you, I really appreciate the tip !
Looks good to me, but you should avoid using a translucent filter on the 'glow' behind the candles because it's not really pixel art in the strict definition if you're using translucent effects, and also, it's artificially bumping your otherwise low colour count from about 20(?) to 40. If you have it on a different layer, and it's not too hard to do, you should consider reuploading the file without the transparent glow sprites.
deliciously evil