It's cool!
By the way there is really no need to hardzoom this way since the user/viewer can zoom with the display features in PJ galery. I strongly suggest you to go back to normal size, and let the viewer decide at which scale he wan't to enjoy your picture :)
Thank you very much for the help) these are my first works :)
This is great! I appreciate the idea of metal material study. I've been working on gold to no avail, but I know I'll get it with time and practice! I love that it's based in a character too. Really neat!
The biggest CC I can give is that it's good practice to upload your art at 1x. It helps keep file sizes down and faster loading times for the site. PJ.com has a nice zoom feature for every submission page that the patrons can utilize to see the detail better. If you personally like your art at a higher zoom just let us know in the comments and we'll be happy to humor you! 
Anywhoo, great work! I look forward to your next one! 
yeaaaah much better! :D