hi ed thanks for being honest first i appreciate honest comments i dont think im going to add it for the weekly challenge most of the time i do something for the weekly challenge when i have nice idea for something but this time i dont realy like the challenge for this week  also its fair you dont like this one every one have their own taste myself im pretty happy with this character design 

i will try to help you out with comments that might help you improve tho im not so good myself but i will try to share my tricks 

Hello, WreX,

I'm going to be honest, this isn't my favorite of your work, and I really like a great deal of you work (just so happens that this piece had to be in the top five of the public queue that I decided to comment on). I suppose it just doesn't suit my taste, but I do like the glowing eyes. That was done well. I'm not sure how fix the mouth. Perhaps not making it so wide on the left side.

I give it one and a half glowing eyes out of five (psst. I round up), but I do encourage you to slap a beard on it and put it in this week's challenge. Drop by my gallery anytime and be as brutally HONEST as possible if you want.

-Ed