Some details I like, for example the little rocks, the mailbox, the stairs...

As Adarias said, unrefined pen tool gestures can be seen on cliff and on rooftop. Also I'm not a big fan of purplish colors on rooftop and woodbridge.

Good continuation !

Hapiel: Thanks, i will consider that in my next works.

Jok: Thank you!

Adarias: Thanks for the advice! But can you be more specific in the parts that you feel unresolverd? Im not have very experience in pixel art, so I really apreciate any help that you can give me.

I can't tell right now if I find the exaggerated linear elements to be too much, or too little.  I think you're on to a uniqe and defining way of approaching markmaking in the context of an aesthetic which is otherwise "solved."  At a glance they feel unresolved, like remnants of unrefined pen tool gestures, but I think there's more potential there.  I'd definitely encourage exploration in this regard -- to play with the way these long strokes build form and texture, and to consider refining (or reducing) the conflicting patterns like dithering to work with them.

cute

Hey,

This piece uses 419 colors, including some alpha transparency where you probably intended to have like 32. Please try and watch this next time! Thanks :)