I don't normally put stuff in the description here so let's start doin that.
Biggest issue I ran into was color count, there are a lot of very samey brown shades in here and I could've stood to brighten some of them up a bit, I was a bit too focused on making the place seem kinda dinghy and dreary. Managed to shave off a lot, though! Overall reasonably happy with it, though. Need to do more larger stuff in this vein.
Yeah I was sorta wondering about the second shade on the ink, the blackish bit near the rips on paper was initially yellowing on parchment, but it got shifted to black when I was lowering the color count and it seems like it kinda lost that in the process.
Thanks for the feedback!