not bad!

@Foxturtle - Indeed it started being done with the grayish color as a background. However when I decided to add the redish color and dither the background I corrected the strands that are lower on the red, but failed to correct the top. I will fix that part.

@Cure - Thank you, the weird combination of boyish face and macho body was my trying to combine Kashou's "things I like" list which was Manly men and beautiful sword boys among other things (I also had a cat and a dog in there ).

Correct also on the thickness of the hair as it is meant to be dreadlocks. I like your edit, I should have stuck with just "manly men"

I think the body is on-point but the face/head is a little off. The physique says macho He-Man, but the face feels a little effeminate, a little anime. Here's an edit. I made the chin less pointy and the jaw stronger. Another discrepancy was the luscious mane of hair and the actual hairline, so I tried to shrink the forehead. The mane itself is rather bulky and the strands are like thick cords. I think this is fair if the character has dreadlocks, otherwise the strands should be thinner and the hair should sit flatter to the head.

This piece is really nice except for the white aa on the top of the hair. It's very jagged and out of place. Did you create this for a white background?

Looks weird.