Man, that's some good and creative work. I see that you spent loads of time to draw that background, face and the surroundings (trees), making theese look pretty neat.
Now let me help you to improve this work (If you want)-
One issue is the main area of focus, the characters do look kinda unfinished or somewhat unpolished IMHO. Based on my experinence, one way to improve the appearance is to study or recreate the metalic effect from various tutorials/artworks and mabe improve the colour choice. (I assume here that the figures are not statues)
Other minor innacuracy here, is the direction the player is looking- neiter at the keyboard nor at the figures, making this kinda strange. Overall, everything else apart from those two issues is perfect.
Im not an expert lol but I hope that my humble opinion will help. Cheers
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Man, that's some good and creative work. I see that you spent loads of time to draw that background, face and the surroundings (trees), making theese look pretty neat.
Now let me help you to improve this work (If you want)-
One issue is the main area of focus, the characters do look kinda unfinished or somewhat unpolished IMHO. Based on my experinence, one way to improve the appearance is to study or recreate the metalic effect from various tutorials/artworks and mabe improve the colour choice. (I assume here that the figures are not statues)
Other minor innacuracy here, is the direction the player is looking- neiter at the keyboard nor at the figures, making this kinda strange. Overall, everything else apart from those two issues is perfect.
Im not an expert lol but I hope that my humble opinion will help. Cheers