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Could you please use a larger thumbnail for this? Using the plaque is clever, but it makes for a tiny thumbnail that's hard to see, hard to click, and doesn't tell people anything about the full piece.
A couple of critiques/suggestions:
The walls look very low relative to the size of the sarcophagus, so the room doesn't feel like it really encloses the space, even though technically it would.
The translucent circles around the flames are a missed opportunity, imho. I think you could get a more interesting and atmosphetic look if you added the light as it would reflect off the bricks rather than as smooth circles that doesn't correspond to anything in the space. It also looks a bit odd that they apparently go up higher than the invisible ceiling.
thx and yeah i can ik its abit unfinished/unpolished
thats because i started to get annoyed with it so i just finished it