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What should he do then, Hapiel? Given his example, I'm curious of the solution myself.
Hey, is your name still relevant? If so:
Can use a lot of work! Why is the mountain so suddenly there in the middle of the grass (forest?), it reads more like a rock that way. Why is the top so highlighted? It should catch an equal amonut of sun on the whole left side (and equal amount of shade on the right side), but often there is less vegetation on the top which give sthe gradient.
Also it's in a really weird shape. Is it a very steep piramid with only the two bottom likes touching the floor? Or is it like a half circle seen from the side with a high spine, if so, why are the sides so symetrical and in this particular shape that messes with the perspective?
The longer I look at it, the more confused I am. Did you have any reference images for this mountain?
TBH, for what its used for it reads well, i straight away thought back to phantasy star 4. It's not a masterpiece or anything, but it works.. Maybe, seeing as its a abstract representation more than a literal thing have some trees and other outcrops so it could be used more widely without getting old quick.