Agree with Hapiel, this looks unfinished but can be a lot better with some work on it.
Hi camerra,
Sorry, this is currently not fit for the PJ gallery! Downscaled previews are not allowed, they are not pixel art. Your main image is quite rough, there are a lot of lines and areas that could be cleaned up and straightened. The piece definitely has potential though, perhaps take it to the WIP forums to get some more feedback on it?
I understand. I've not had the time to sit down and put the work on this yes, but I probably will soonish.