Thank you for your feedback.
I tried but I can't rewrite what i posted.
I'll repost my work after apply your feedback.
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Interesting blocky clusters o: Looks pretty cool with how they contrast from the more organic lineart.
Her skin looks very pink, like she has a sunburn D: I think it would benefit from being less pink/red. If it's meant to be pink-tinted by lighting, then the clothing should have a similar tint towards pink, but it doesn't.
Edit: Also, the rules say that works with solid backgrounds that aren't used for anything (such as for showing external AA) should generally be transparent.
You don't need to repost your work, your edit went through fine! You just need to hard+refresh (ctrl+F5) or clear your PJ cache to see it.