sorry, but this really is one of the crappiest pieces i've seen here: the folds don't fit a bit, the hands and belts have as much volume as folded paper, the length of the arms differ, she neither has contrast nor aa but far too much gradients.. and i guess i missed things (please fill in)

As critisism, i must say the anatomy for your pieces is quite off. You'll have to research this far more before you'll be able to create something this large effectively. The folds are completely random, and look more like sewn lines. The sword also has a horrible gradient and is a very odd colour. You really should keep your palette low, it will keep things cleaner and easier in the long term to work with. Keep at it, perhaps try something half the size next time, then you can fit more detail into a smaller piece.

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