chanfan: well, in the original, the shirt is tighter than the pants, so the pants crease only in the pelvic area and near the lower leg. I'll take a look at that "leg bending effect". Thnx

Lawrence: yeah, that makes sense, hadn't noticed it! The creases follow that direction because his left shoulder is slightly rotated back, but what you said also makes sense. I'll look into it, and thanks!

Neatpuppy: i don't like outlines, specially in (intended) realistic pieces like this. Animated, it would be easier to distinguish, not needing an outline, i hope.
Good point about the buttons :). I kinda like the wrinkles on the shirt, but i'll look into toning them down.

Thanks for the comments ppl.

This is very nicely done! I love the creases on the shirt but I'm thinking. where are the creases on his pants? Also, his left leg looks a bit akward.. It looks bent in a very wierd way if you ask me! Other than that, awesome work! Fav!

Bah, I feel like a right wally for not seeing this and commenting on this character in the other piece. Well, like I said I love the lighting. The biggest thing I can notice, though, is that the creases on the shirt, I think, should be extending down from the armpit area of his outstreched arm, because that's where the tension would be. It's hardly a problem but I would check that out.

Nice..    Try adding an outline so the piece looks less like a photo-cutout.. Also, this might not be a problem but the wrinkles on the belly kinda looks like bear claw upon longer viewing so. Try to make the main wrinkles more curvy and don't forget the buttons on the shirt should also sway with the clothes too.