The background and letters look pretty good. The gun and hand are lacking though. The gun looks very cartoony with it's heavy emphasis on line instead of light and shade, and the hand has next to no form. Due to the way it's shaded, it looks more like folded paper. Remember, fingers are similar to cylinders, so try to shade them accordingly. Right now they're shaded as if they're flat.
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