Good job on the non-broken outlines dude! Glad to see you finally stopped doing that. :D Good improvement!
There is one hell of a pixel-schmixel in the left upper corner left, bud.
Otherwise it's ideal! man, you really improve your mecha skills! It's kinda impressive.
Mango, you truly never disappoint, this is such a huge improvement yet the lad looks 10x more badass, keep it up man.