Yeah, that image was a mystery; how do you build such a brilliant machine and then only spend 5 minutes scribbling such a simple bootscreen that everyone will see, every day!? ("And what do you mean I have to insert a disk, there's no built-in system???" - Everyone who came from the C64 :D)
Your update is definitely an improvement! :)
The C64 blew my mind as a kid
... & still an impressive piece of hardware today!