yeah. his skin is abit yellow, I find it funny you'd say that really, because in the past I'd get complains I was making skin too red :p. looking at it again I completely see what you mean about the torso being too large and legs being too short, I'll try to work on that for future sprites.

I agree with Scruffs, Setzer your coloring is good but if you want to make further progress you just have to read up on measurements, proportions and anatomy. Rock on!

oh one last thing, his skin is rather yellow, try hues closer to red.

kinda jagged, but the main problem with this and all your characters is you consistently make the torso too long and the legs too short. 

Oh another baldy. The black shadow looks good