@iLKke valid crits!  I had even intended to get to those, but this was for the Pixel Dailies, and when I realized it was morning and they were about to post the new topic, I said to myself "too late!" and submitted.  After sending it up, I didn't feel like editing -- to me the point of these is to improve, and preserving mistakes made more sense than extending the sitting.

So much to love here! Great rhythm and materials, and that's some Big Brother-level of contrast mastery.

The rough style also works super well, but personally I'd give some more AA to those two fingers in focus.

Nicely done.

Amazing work.

I love how the color is so simple! This is awesome