Hi. Thank you for your feedback. left part can use some aa, only thing is i think this area must be highlighted a bit more, i like how it looks on bottom part of her hair though. Banding was totally overlooked, i have no idea how i missed it =( Pallet thing is kinda ongoiing problem for me, i really need to force myself to use less colours, Though her cheek is what i struggled with the most, i really wanted to show a bit of a depth, but cant find a right way to do it it was eather looking flat or too dark so she starts to look older, i guess i just need more practice there. I really like how her lip looks on third image tho, it's way better. Once again thank you for your time and effort you put in this, i appreciate it.
Hello, it's pretty cool!
You can add antialiasing on the left part of the air, and be carefull of banding!
Your pallet is also a little strange, with many no-so-usefull similar colors.
A little edit so you can see what I'm talking about:
https://i.imgur.com/DHrxASu.png
From left to right: origina, added antialiasing and removed some banding, removed similar colors
No problem, continue the good work :)