So I guess you need to work a litte more. Eyebrown is to close from forehead (also, she doesn't have forehead). You need to work better in the shading and the colors, you do a lot banding (a common mistake where you draw a line and straight you draw another with the same length with another color).
There is a lot issues, but if you go to the forum we can help step by step you do a better version.
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So I guess you need to work a litte more. Eyebrown is to close from forehead (also, she doesn't have forehead). You need to work better in the shading and the colors, you do a lot banding (a common mistake where you draw a line and straight you draw another with the same length with another color).
There is a lot issues, but if you go to the forum we can help step by step you do a better version.