nice one

This is looking a lot more readable and appealing than your other works. The colours could be a bit nicer as you said but other than that, nice one, keep it up ^^

Thanks! Just for clarity I'll explain what I meant. by un-detailed, I meant there were a lot of opaque and plainly colored elements of the composition. I guess it could be a good thing, since I have a tendency to have too much color noise in my drawings. 

I don't know what you mean by "un-detailed". I find this as your best piece from all the six I saw.