<3 Layne. Your preview is somehow over 25kb and won't show on the front page.
Likeness is pretty good, but the anatomy is very wonky: most awkwardly with the agape mouth, which is so comically large that it cuts into the teeth and jawline. His musculature is also very weirdly prominent under the shirt - even if his top was that tight I don't think the muscle to our right would bulge quite so much.
You're getting there though!
Great work!