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Those wings are amazingly done +6
Too bad they're just mirrored, so it looks a tad akward -1
The wings, character, and background just don't match styles, and the wings don't really look like they're attached to the guy -1
Total: 4
Excellent work BBD. I like the shading and pallete, but there are some issues that I think could be better.
First of all, the piece does not have too many harmony... Why? because you have three distinct elements that are not blending together: Arch, the wings and the sky. Arch hasa style his own, so have the wings. They seem to be from different artist, maybe different games, and someone pasted them together thinking it would be cool.
And why the sky? Too much cellout from Arch's wings. Celout + light background = BAD. Black outline + light background = BAD. Of course, taking the piece as one thing. If it were a cutscene from a game, I would understand. Still, celout could be avoided.
Last, but not least, mirrored wing = BAD =P
6/7 ;D
i like the detail in the wings and the cloud in the baskground