Cool, but kinda unreadable. Seperate the sections more and use contrast.

space marine rulez! shoulders are best

is it Dark Angel?

hey, do you think you could do a techmarine in full servo-harness?  That would be awesome

BTW, very cool chapter master

This one is great aswell, but once again I don't like the head. Maybe a bit less cartoony?

Holy crap, this is amazing, especially the amount of detail you worked in on such a small guy.

Awesome sprite! Nice for a last boss.

I'm glad you actually decided to join. It looks good, and it's probably one of your best peices, although the Knightman sprite that one the contest may top it.

I know very little of Warhammer, but the sprite is as has been said excellent. Your pallet needs the most work.

Actually this was for my own army, the Green Tyrants.  Guess I shoulda said that at first shouldn't I?  Forgot the backpack *mistake*.  Truth is, I shoulda posted the bio of this guy up.  He is Chapter Master Tao.  His legs were lost in a epic battle with two Nob orcs, and he made it out with half his body.  An apothecary luckly saved him and got him bandaged up.  His legs are completely robotic, and a little larger than a normal man's legs, this allows for much faster running.  I am not using this as an excuse, that's the way he's been since I created my army *which is still in the making* about ... 8 months? ago.  But that's who he is, and his army, the Green Tyrants.  Thanks for the comments all.

nah, it cant be a dark angel, they dont use gold and the iconography is missing.  i cant identify it though, perhaps a derivative chapter?
anyhoo, this looks really good, but i do have a few concerns.  the first is trivial, and that is the the armament isnt very functional, especially for a chapter master, and the lightning claw+power weapon combo doesnt really make sense.  also, his armor isnt terminator armor, but he has no backpack?

as far as important stuff, the legs seem much too big for the body.  some shading also could use some reworking

all in all though this is a really great piece and it shows a lot of talent and potential, i hope to see you post here for a long while

Dark Angel, isn't he? I really like this piece, but the palette could be a lil darker.

Yup, the palette could be improved a bit but I like this piece very much =)

It looks pretty good, but that green colour hurts my eyes, make it more dull.