My entry for #pixel_dailies with
While I agree with MrHai that the concept with the flashlight is nice, it could have been executed far better. The persepctive between the background and the midground doesn't make sense because if we were to point a flashlight toward the hills we still wouldn't see the top of the edge of them assuming that they are farther in the distance. The shadows could have also been tweaked a bit more.
With that being said I feel like that this could have been worked on alot more and this would have been a truly stellar piece. So it's not a bad piece all together, in fact I would say its a good start, but there are lessons to be learned from this piece that you have to keep in mind for future works (Or if you choose to go back into this and remake it at any point in the future)
Love the concept with the flashlight - and a nice, naive style.