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Good start! I think moving your light source a bit, even if you still want to have it mostly a top left, can help you get rid of the pillow shading feeling a bit. But it's nice that you can tell you already want to have some reflected light instead of a straight gradient, for instance, so keep it up!
When shading an object, there's something called a terminus, which is typically about at the "equator" of the object relative to the lightsource, after which the shadow ceases to get darker. It may even get lighter if there's some reflected light from the surface behind it.