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Hey that's very true, goes to show how long it's been since I did my last bit of 2D work and recieved critisisms. Must admit there were a lot more critics back then compared to 3D work, I put this down to that it's harder to produce a good looking 2D peice of work compared to 3D. Thanks again guys. I think the anatomy is crazy because it's Hulk, he's not human, he's something else, more extreme.
Alan, if you subbmit an art, you´re exposed to recive critics about the anatomy and others, not only about the pixel paintwork itself. The whole of a work it´s the complete structure of the art itself (draw, colour, dithering , position of the body or pieces of the scene...), not only the colour or the dithering. All the members of the page has recibed some critics about your works. Don´t fall in the "stars vanity". I worked in illustration and design for 16 years and I still recive critics. Remember: the critic is good ´cause teach you about your wrongs or to doing better jobs.
My best whishes for you and your work. Carry on.
It´s a good job of shadows and dithering... but the anatomy is wrong: the left chest in the torso must be smaller, the right hand bigger and the top abdominal muscles smaller. The twist of the entire body are wrong (the navel must begin over the button of the jeans and the entire abdomen must be twisted to the end of the centre of the chest)
Although this is fantasy art, I wasn't angling towards perfection. And it doesn't need to be more green, I wanted to do something different, sorry. And it's pretty good for 7 hours.
Good work, just have a few crits (off the top of my head):
Jeans seem turned towards the viewer more than the center line of his torso.
Navel is too low, look at this:
http://yahooligans.yahoo.com/reference/gray/subjects/subject?id=118
Wow! That's dudey! Like the signature.
I think you'll need to get Danny's permission before you can use his hair, LOL 
Keep em coming Al.
Great fun to work on.
