Thanks for the feedback, really appreciate it (:, definitely gonna take it into consideration.

I also hope to do some big scenes soon hehe

A very ambitious piece! Cool scene, but I have some advice that I hope may be helpful:
- If you include god rays, you need more contrast between light and dark. The spot where they hit should be much brighter than their surroundings.
- The bright spots on the ground would also illuminate the surrounding pillars by indirect light.
- It's important to be consistent with light sources. The tombstones (?) are very bright on the right side and dark on the left, but the pillars don't match this enough. In the background, the pillars just look flat.

Hope to see more scenes like this in the future.