Although is cute, it looks pretty unfinished. Can you work a bit more on it? Slightly soften strong corners on the hair, try to add a little volume to the hair with a darker shade, shade the neck as you shaded the face, and of course the shade under the collar would be highly desirable.
She's cute, but could use more polish! It's defininitely over-AA'd in some places, like the jaggy bottom of the hair on the left. The hair still looks very flat, and the flat pale stripes across it make it seem even less contoured.