Nice! But I almost like the ominous emptiness of the preview even more!
Love the details on the window and the rim light effect! Really cool lettering, also. 
really nice scene. i love the subtle light reflection on the glass
Such nice illumination. And that lettering - beautiful. 3th one is the best fo far - like Nightmare On Elm Street :)
You've made great use of the canvas. You managed to put so much detail into this! Very nice title design and great use of the palette.