shes so long! like fashion croquis but without clothes..... most of what could be picked at here has already been said, so ill be content just saying 'nice job'
Hey her figure looks ok to me, I like a curvey woman. Agreed with pritty much all of Anlina S comments, Espeially the gap between legs and ears being to low. And her legs mebs look a tad to long, not freakish looking tho.
I don't think there's anything wrong with the width of her hips - women's hips should be shoulder width or wider. The thighs seem a little slim for such a curvy girl. I'd make them a pixel wider and reduce the gap between her legs a bit, but really her lower half doesn't bother me. I like the shape of her calves and the positioning of her feet.
The base of her neck seems a little thick - like she's extremely muscular - but this isn't reflected in the the rest of her figure. I think she would benefit from a slimmer neck taht tapers off a little more rapidly, rather than the long, gentle slope into the shoulders you have now. The dark lines you useed to define her throat also seem a little heavy - maybe fill those in with a lighter colour?
Her ears seem far too low on her head, like they're attached to her lower jaw bone. I'd move them up two pixels. I'm also not crazy about her mouth, which seems overall to angular and harsh for her face. AAing to give her a softer mouth would really benefit this piece and give her a more youthful, feminine look.
I like her breasts, they look quite natural, which is a nice change from most of the bases you see out there. You seem to have a pretty decent grasp of anatomy.
the legs are looong, and are faar apart from each other. she has a huuuge unnatractive ass as far as i can see (hips wider than arms!) yikes, so generally you messed up below the waist. its okay - it could be better...
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