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Title: Soccer Stamp - UPDATED
Pixel Artist: halotank  (Level 2 Petty Officer :: 711 points)
Posted: 9/5/2006 19:44
Statistics:  4 comments    0 faves    0 avatars

Alright, this took about 4-5 hours of work.
I know it's not the best, but I really put alot of effort in this, and I was really satisfied with it, I know the soccer guy doing a bicycle kick doesn't exactly have the best lineart, but, I'm crap at lineart, and I was really impressed at how I did it, because I thought I did a pretty good job.
C+C appreciated.

P.S.
This was made for Gas13's stamp collaboration, I'll email to him soon, I just hope he excepts it haha.

Updated - E00t

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Anlina S. (Level 6 Manager) @ 9/6/2006 18:58
This looks like it has a lot of potential but I think it could bear with a lot of improving - it does look unfinished at this point. You don't seem to have any light source - you've shaded the calves so that the light source appears to be coming from the back of the legs, but this is not matched on his thighs. There is no clear lightsource on his shirt - if anything it looks like the light source is coming from the viewer, like a photo taken with flash on.

The anatomy is also questionable... I really cannot tell which leg is suppose to be in front, and I can't tell if his arms are supposed to be bent or straight. There seems to be a slight bend in his right arm but it's very close to the shoulder, so I can't really tell if it's supposed to be an elbow or if his arm is attached oddly at the shoulder. I'd also fill out the hands a bit more so that they are more than just balls. I think a bit of anatomy study and starting with a wire frame sketch would really help you.

The composition of this piece is really boring. As a rule you never place your subject in the centre of your canvas. Rather you should divide your canvas into thirds vertically and horizontally and place your subject where the lines intersect.

Maybe add a soccer ball to this image to add some more interest and make it clear that it is supposed to be soccer?

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halotank (Level 2 Petty Officer) @ 9/6/2006 12:56
Milky, alright, thanks, I'll work on that.
Jalonso, yeah, forgot the country name, and, with Milky's stuff I can detail =it more, I'll probably atually give im a face too.

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jalonso (Level 11 Godfather) @ 9/6/2006 09:52
Looks quite unfifnished. You will need to add the country name and detail this further for Gas to accept it, imho.

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milkyjon (Level 4 Murderer) @ 9/6/2006 07:58
Jus a few things sprang to mind. You have a black outline around the whole sprite apart from his hair. Also the arm in the foreground is much thinner than the one behind which looks odd (perspective nd all).

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