I think your lineart is excellent, she has a lot of character and personality, though I see a couple of jaggy spots, like on her arm, that could benefit from some cleaning up...
However, your shading leaves something to be desired. You don't seem to have a light source...she has highlights all over her hair, but no shadows. The shadows on her skirt are just around the edges, so it seems kind of pillowy, but then you've placed your highlights along the edges of your shadows. The shading on her left arm is so subtle, I didn't even realize that you had shaded it till I zoomed in - it looks more like AA right now.
I'd strongly suggest starting over with your shading, pick a light source and really think about how light falls on a body and on fabric. Post in the WIP forum if you need additional help. I think this is a really charming piece with a lot of potential (look at that fabulous facial expression!) and I'd really like to see you refine this piece rather than leaving it as is.
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-stares- Awe, that is so cute 8D