either that is one flippin tiny toy pencil or a gigantic book... i dont really like the whole shine, not only does it look ugly, it looks unnatural - maybe you should make them contrast less? generally i dont think you payed too much time to the piece over all - it takes an hour to do something like this at the most...
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