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In my mind, this is a big improvement. Nice colors. The only thing that stands out is the river, which looks a bit cartoony compared to the rest. Maybe using blotches of light and darkness would be a better way of communicating ripples in the water. I don't know.
Good work!
Not a bad one attempt, to my mind, I would rather recommend to avoid using lines at all costs, when the whole piece is made out of spots of colors. The water ripples and the sign look a little bit off.