Thanks! I'm noticing the theme for this image is that I should try and focus less on the reference I use, it would have been pretty simple to bring that area down one tone.

Bounce lighting on this one is great, I like the saturated colours used as a transition tone on the fabric as well as the intense bounce light on the cheek. Only thing that stood out to me was the very bright strip of fabric left of the torso mostly because it felt like it would be on the shadow side (breaks the overall shape a bit IMO). As a whole this is awesome Wrangler!

Thanks a lot!

really good stuff!

Thank you! You're probably right about the glasses, some green in the reflection would probably make them attract more attention. Honestly, I was mostly going off a picture I took of him so maybe I could have thought it through a little more.

Nice work
this has some interesting lighting going on in the cheek.
I am wondeirng if it wouldn't be better in this case to use the effect of green on the glasses.
 

Thanks 

I like the result you achieved with such a reduced color palette