What an interesting way to outline, I quite like it! I also like the setting, and the clouds are wondrous!
I'm not sure what your intention was with the wolf-like character, but I feel if you had pushed the ferocity - particularly in the face - just a little bit more I think it would sell the idea of them being opponents better. To me it feels as if the wolf is more of a pal than an opponent, but maybe that was the intention. Good stuff either way!
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What an interesting way to outline, I quite like it! I also like the setting, and the clouds are wondrous!