Did you draw that????

The arm hung more than she

L'arma pesa più di lei

great choice of colors, but i dont really like the black leg

kinda looks like clipart style lol...

Wow, quite a polarized response. Thanks for the comments everyone.

Gun: yes, it is not finished, and yes it looks crappy. :)

Blacks: The thought process is more based on the fact that the gun is not finished than anything else. IMO a darker background would change the overall impact of the “cute & sexy” image.

Arm & Leg shading: I think it is a little flat looking.

 

Size: Too big? That is a bizarre criticism. If it was half the size you would certainly lose some detail.

 

Lopsided Bra: Is this due to the line art or coloring/shading?

 

Fuzzy Bra-Strap: I didn’t use the smudge tool, but I see what you mean – it is a little OTT.

 

Kinda Odd Right Breast: Is this due to the line art or coloring/shading?

Wonderful work! I'm amazed! XD

Holy shit! that's fucking cool nice coloring, but her right breast looks kinda odd

I quite like the look of the AA in this piece. It's very smooth. Though it almost looks as if you went way overboard on the bra strap... it looks like you used photoshop's smudge tool, and that's not a good thing for pixel art. Though I must say I love the hair and the face. It's eye-catching for sure.

Seemes Kenneth fejer in style.  Before I saw the name I thought it was one of his pieces.  Overall, this is a great piece. 

Great work on the lineart Dazz and even more praise to Atooi for bringing the lineart to life. I like the overall comic style given off by the colours and techniques used. However I am not quite in favour of the large black areas, then again, I guess it's what you both were aiming for. The gun is really the only let down in this piece, but it is unfinished after all.

Her bra seems a little lopsided... but overall i like it.

Too big IMO. You could shrink this dwn to half-size and still keep all the details.

my only crit is the shading on the gun looks a bit off compared to the rest of the styles.  the colors and everything else is great

i take jalonso's stance on not commenting on the lineart

I wonder what the thought process was in leaving the blacks in (other than the eyes). The colors have a K.Fejer feel and so the mint green fits in. I would have liked somthing much darker.

n/c on lineart.

Wow, it is so simple and clean and yet so stylish and awsome! I really like classical comic feel that it has, it looks stylish without the AA. Only place thats a bit annoying is the shading of arm and leg.

Hey! WHOA! That's awesome stuff man, I've always wanted my pictures in colour...Thanks! I love it!

huge n classy - i dont like the texture of the fat gun too much, but thats just an opinion

your aa is perfect and so is your chardesign. i love you