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I think maybe what makes the jaw seem different from the photo and the portrait is that in the photo Helm has a stubble which makes the jaw more portruded. In the portrait he does not have this and the jawline and neck blend together more.
Anyways... You know I like this Helm, it's a really magnificent selfportrait!
My words were "it seems to be a bit of an overstatement". I'm not carving that in stone, it's just the impression I get. For instance, if I make some abstract fiddly pixelwork and say it represents something grandiose, no one can say it doesn't.
I'm not trying to say that your cliff background can't represent complex aspects of your being, I'm just saying that it seems a stretch considering the information the viewer is given. And you are right: a good self-portrait doesn't end at a likeness, it tells a story.
Does this help clarify? It's just a little criticism, I'm not trying to be mean. :)