you messed up the hair

Cool manga, nice AA

Cool manga style. That's tough to get right.

Lol I agree with Elk, could have looked like Naruto a lot more
You should redo the hair and nose

Nice, but i think need more details in his air, its weird, and his nose

hella long eh o.O

thx for your comments everybody, in the future i will keep in mind that AA isnt everything.

looks nice and some AA would make it look nicer but overall looks good

Lineart is ok but the AA is kinda overdone as the others said. It looks like a photoshop effect, in a bad way.

The line art here is quite decent, but as BOB said, you've really over worked the AA.

Your shading also seems incomplete. You have a strong lilght source showing on his face and the metal part of his headband, but there is no directional shading on the cloth of the head band, on his ears, hair or mouth.

I think this piece would really benefit from some additional work. I'd take it over to the WIP forum for some detailed critique.

Awesome!...Even though it's not perfect (for example, no dithering), Naruto just rocks, and the shading is beautifully unsmooth. 5/5 + Fav.

I believe you coulda' achieved this effect without so much hardcore, unneeded AA, and more different shades of color. The piece has some good lineart, color potential, and you know the placement of color pretty well(I guess because your following the original characters style). I would still try and freshen this piece up though.