Better, but still face is a bit flat which is not queit fit to the that beautiful hair. Leaps are smudged also. Here rough edit for an idea (hope you wouldn't mind=). http://www.foolstown.com/misc/face0.gif I'd say it could take some more work on overall volume. I'm not much of an expert on this, but you always could post it on the forum in wip section and you'll get some help on it if needed=)
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of course it's not =)) I'm not clearvoyant, I just try to give you an idea how to get out of flat.=)
that was good what you did Fool <_<
anyway on this good job with the awesome hair, but probably like everyone said the face does need improvements