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Title: Once again, nother mockup, Update 3
Pixel Artist: Josiah  (Level 2 Flatfoot :: 26998 points)
Posted: 3/1/2007 20:28
Statistics:  18 comments    7 faves    0 avatars

this mockup seems to be my most complete versions

http://i102.photobucket.com/albums/m102/Josiahiouigi/randomwips.png

links to a bunch of random wips 

oh and yes I have redone the Luigi, and also made a few more things to V.2 it seems to be comin along well methinks

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udeveloping (Level 2 Flatfoot) @ 8/13/2018 04:56

 Hello! i am Dave! i am looking for pixelartist that joins my team! more info to udeveloping@gmail.com, i am a game developer, i got an amazing japanese music composer! we are looking for a great pixelartist to join us!


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GallantJay (Level 1 Jukyu) @ 12/26/2007 15:35
Excellent job! I love it :).

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JerryPie (Level 11 Big Foot) @ 3/8/2007 06:50
6/6 SWEET! I love it.

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Vertigo-Zero (Level 9 Necrophiliac) @ 3/5/2007 22:14
OK :P let me know :)

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Josiah (Level 2 Flatfoot) @ 3/5/2007 06:26

yes I will have the sprites, once i finish all of the sheets :P


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Vertigo-Zero (Level 9 Necrophiliac) @ 3/4/2007 21:59
Lol I bet it will turn out ok :P but do you have the sprites? else I cant do anything with it :)

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Setzer (Level 8 Cannibal) @ 3/3/2007 20:33
it looks much better now.

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Josiah (Level 2 Flatfoot) @ 3/3/2007 15:29

If you do make a game out of these sprites, I hope it will turn out good.... ^^'

thanks btw


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Vertigo-Zero (Level 9 Necrophiliac) @ 3/3/2007 08:09
Let me make a game out of it :) let me know ;)

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Josiah (Level 2 Flatfoot) @ 3/2/2007 16:12

there we are

And i must agree, this looks better then it did before


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Balladofwindfishes (Level 1 Rookie) @ 3/2/2007 14:11

the very back layer where you have those leaves, maybe somthing a little less busy, even a solid color, will make it look better


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ptoing (Level 7 Cuttlefish) @ 3/2/2007 10:48
The background is still very busy, almost Top Banana quality.

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Josiah (Level 2 Flatfoot) @ 3/2/2007 07:43
fixed the backdrop and changed the color one the blocks

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cure (Level 11 Pixellite) @ 3/2/2007 07:11
Yoshi?  Don't you mean koopa?  Silly jal.

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Setzer (Level 8 Cannibal) @ 3/2/2007 06:54
What exactly is going on in the background? the bright blue clashing with the (floating?) green leaves irks me for some reason.

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jalonso (Level 11 Godfather) @ 3/2/2007 04:50
Yes, its hard to make out.
*the leaves in the BG being green stand out too much
*the UI elements blend in way too much the tops of the trees of the BG are great but maybe simplify the bottom foliage/greenery so that the sprites stand out some.
* the peachy color of the blocks with the white stars and ? look weak. Changing one of these two color ramps will help. Of course I mean the orange which would help the shells too.
* the sky blue is too strong, notice the venus plant coming out of the pipe blends in too much. lighten that.
*use that very dark brown on the foreground tree to emphasize the actual platforms that now just blend in. They are fine but too 'blended in'
*If you ever cut Yoshi (my hero) in half like that again, I will send my henchmen to beat you to a pulp

ps: nice mockup and all the nitpicking is intended to help not diss.

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Josiah (Level 2 Flatfoot) @ 3/2/2007 00:11

blends a bit to much huh?

hmm I'll see what i can do, thanks


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cure (Level 11 Pixellite) @ 3/1/2007 22:29
The busy background makes the foreground hard to read.

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