Rival Schools Natsu :: Pixel Art Detail

I LOVE this game to death!!! Clean pic. I think her pelvis could face to the right a bit more rather than the front, but I like the simple feel of it.

They need to bring out a Rival Schools 3....:)))

She needs more color and shading. 

Or you might try an outline. 
In any case, it is a piece that could be really great if you tweaked it. 

I hope to see you do so. 

the idea was to do a first try. i know it needs work. but its my first go at it. i hope to one day be good but for now i think ill just continue to work on this art and become better.

Is the idea that She is supposed to look like a He?

yeah. i did indeed use elena as a reference also! thats amazing that you knew that. what i basically did was make one long box. half of it was a single frame from elena standing still, next to it was me trying to get her pose down. i think i did a great job recreating the pose.


but what would you suggest i do to make her face better?

   I find it strange that her body looks a lot like an idle frame of Elena's stance, off of Street Fighter 3...I could be wrong, but the similarities in the current pose, and the elongated legs are screaming clone.

   Oh well. I think her face needs a lot of work, as theres not much to tell from detail. All in all, this needs a bit more work, and refinement, and it'll be good....

FINE! im just about ready to make her right leg thiner.

i also thought about how the legs looked sort of big. but i like it the way it is. i mean she is an athlete. so lets just say she has some muscular legs.

The legs are way to big, and the upper body looks weird for some reason.