Soccer Sim Mockup

Soccer Sim Mockup

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Soccer Sim Mockup



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Title: Soccer Sim Mockup
Pixel Artist: sfmorris  (Level 1 Rookie :: 14 points)
Posted: 6/5/2007 15:22
Statistics:  6 comments    0 faves    0 avatars

I hardly deserve to be posting anything here, given the outstanding talent of all you true artists, but as I sincerely wish I were a more capable pixeler, I thought I would submit this for your review and comments. These are screenshots from a soccer simulation, cut short by a lack of artistic vision on my part. Any and all suggestions and critiques welcome.
Thank you~

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jalonso (Level 11 Godfather) @ 6/8/2007 18:36
ok, so I'm retarded, there I said it. I totally saw the indentation from the corner cube as a gradient on the bleachers. Please ignore all that babbling

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sfmorris (Level 1 Rookie) @ 6/7/2007 18:23
jalonso -- I wonder if you mean the the blue-ish, semi transparent layer going around the "top" of the stadium? It isn't very well executed, but it was meant to be a little glass roof of sorts for the fans (open in the middle above the actual field) -- could that be what's behind the oddity you are seeing?

And I agree with your comments about color continuity -- the first screens where you enter your name and select your team are all in that red-theme, while the game employs the light blue (probably has something to do with matching the "snow" color on the grounds, and that I never developed things past January in the game ;-)  Your soccer season is supposed to go all year round of course...)

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jalonso (Level 11 Godfather) @ 6/7/2007 05:56
3 o'clock or top corner. Where the orange looking 'thing' is, wtf is that, odd gradient, overlooked layer?
One detail that I did fail to mention was the lack of any yellow or red text in the bottom 2 screens. It would make for a set of screen that tie in and relate to each other in a more consistent way. Not that the blues are not nice. I strongly believe that some continuity from item to item is a strong visual communication to the gamer that 'action' is required because things continue even when still. <--- art nerd, lol

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sfmorris (Level 1 Rookie) @ 6/7/2007 05:24
Thanks for the feedback Skull and Jalonso -- you are absolutely right about the lack of shadows -- would the corner you mention be roughly at 12:00, 3:00, 6:00 or 9:00?

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jalonso (Level 11 Godfather) @ 6/6/2007 18:58
Seems deserving to me.

The cloud shadows are a great detail but without the building having shadows the clouds look odd to me all by themselves.

Some odd transparency layer on the inside corner of the stadium on the left.

FFF, ftw ;)

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Skull (Level 11 CEO) @ 6/6/2007 01:30
Nice idea, looking real snazzy.

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