You posted this as a WIP in the forum and then submitted it without changing anything... at least clean up your linework on the clouds and smoke and work on the pillowshading aspect.
In short... too much shading on the smoke, the cloud and the brown building in an easy way. Brown Building: Get rid of the bottom 3 px (or so) shading and the outline shading, and same with the weird outline you've got. It doesn't match the light source. The machine: is pretty good, same with the middle building and the one on the left although it doesn't fit with the rest of the picture- too many windows. Group 4 of them together.
The smoke and the cloud, ditch some of the shading around the edges and get into the middle details.
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